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Music Box

Small and black
you caught my eye.
Wolves of silver
guarded your sides
in wary silence
while
he
on the lid
hung in sleep.

You pulled my gaze,
and invited my touch.
You opened for me,
and my eyes closed
at the lonely chimes
of your soft
crystal
melody.
©2008-2009 ~ria-fox
:iconria-fox:

Author's Comments

Boy oh boy does heaven know I tried with this one. I still think it needs work with its imagery, but heaven knows I'm still having trouble with that too.

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:iconsensuistwannabe:
Lovely rhythm break. It's not the beat that matters, it's the off-beat.
:iconsomething44:
Cute poem. Needs a little bit more parts of a music box for it to manifest well. Good work though

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:iconria-fox:
taken note of :D thanks for reading!

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:iconria-fox:
thank you! :XD:

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